Just a few of muh poems.

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  1. ClassicRockGirl

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    This Radiating Space

    Your smoke clouds my mind
    Constantly blind I seek the truth
    That no one can find
    Is it wrong of me to seek it?

    Grey clouds and dismal sun
    Sweep over the trees and the mountains
    They remind me of your grace, fluctuating masterpieces
    That were born so naturally and done without changed face

    The wind blows and twirls me 'round
    Constantly following the whisper sounds
    Of mother nature's dreaming face
    Looking into the mirror of liquid faith

    It's time to test this radiating space

    The Burning Anarchy

    My burning heart
    Was lit by you
    And my soul
    Was cleansed

    Waters rushed, flooding the high lands
    Spirits twisting in the wind
    Earthbound torture to their ever lasting bodies
    Coiled by lust and artificial communities

    We were stranded in the trees
    Looking below to our land that became our sea
    Anarchy arose
    Taking our hands and guiding us to freedom

    And it felt like the warmth of the sun
    The ultimate shake of the ground
    The growth and metamorphosis
    Of the world I was stranded in unleashed me

    I’m a wild beast
    Craving the end
    I’m a trembling child
    Quivering in the corner
    I’m all but nothing

    While I watch my heart burn again

    Come to Me Silence

    Come to me, silence.
    Don’t wait for time to intrude.
    I’m already ready to let you in.
    Slithering in my seat, I’ll wait for you in fire’s heat.

    My mind unravels and scrolls down the stairs.
    Neutral and waving through the calmness of the night,
    Come to me, silence.
    Come to me and breathe in the rest.
     
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    Incredible, I have a few poems very similar :)
     
  3. ClassicRockGirl

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    Beautiful, , , Thanks
     
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    you 're very welcome you no reason to thank me thank your self for the creation of your self in words yes
     
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    do u play any of these words to guit ar ?
     
  9. ClassicRockGirl

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    I haven't put music behind them yet but I might. :)
     
  10. ~xR*Z*Nx~

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    Share with me when you do !!!
     
  11. ClassicRockGirl

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    I will for sure. :) And thanks for the picture comment by the way. :)
     
  12. ~xR*Z*Nx~

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    Yuh Huh :) NO problem !!
     
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