Just try to love people

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hawk 256 aldokraas, Oct 12, 2025.

  1. hawk 256 aldokraas

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    just try to love people
    Just try to pray
    More often to God
    Every single day
    Just try to be honest
    With you friends
    Try to make peace
    With your friends
    Also try to live in peace
    Don't take peace for granted
    Because peace is all we need
    We need to thank a veteran
    That gave us the gift
    Of peace
     
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  2. GuitarMemoir21

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    Good Poem Brother, peace of mind is all that we sought for at the end of the day...well for the most part of anyways.
     
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  3. Native Vee

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    Very nice Poem!!!!


    Thank you [​IMG]
     
  4. kuriiroobi

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    Thanks for putting this out there. It hit me in a quiet way. Feels simple when you read it, but kind of lands heavier after a bit. The part about peace – yeah, that one stuck. It’s easy to forget it’s not just a word we throw around. I like that you didn’t dress it up, just said it how it is. That last line, about thanking a veteran, it grounds the whole thing. Makes it real. Appreciate you sharing this reminder, it lingers.
     
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