let it go

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Oct 17, 2005.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    instinctive is deepness with
    defensive thinking no, although,
    throw one back for me,
    we'll meter more consistently,
    eventually time will arrive,
    over recent under-supply,
    all drive-thru and deadlines
    and fluorescent, familiarized reflections
    within immortalized impressions,
    but, it depends…

    mondays gridlock reception,
    give me till ten or tomorrow
    or never again;
    no, let it go

    under the bed or the rug.
    keep it in clutter, no one will know
    a shadow show from a status quo.

    below radar range, changing echoes
    into what a mirror's wicked trick relies:
    buried events and clever disguise
    to copy lives covered with feinted fun,
    mocking someone else's outcomes
    to become a wraith reflection,
    a numb, stereotyped ad
    flagging warnings; best walk away,
    every day’s better when not engaged
    in excising decay.

    so, let it go
    down as mistake,
    a breakdown of mental state,
    a phase of crossed fates
    fated to deflate; let it go,

    get over it and the weight will relax.
    harmony backtracks to the past
    and the overlap comes fast,

    just let it go
    into candle flame,
    in a funeral campaign
    draining the dates
    and the times
    and the name,
    let it go
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    man your writing rocks fulmah! love it! :D
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thats awesome, fulmah, pulsing with reality and filled with a clarity.
    Keep the light of inspiration on. I know mind can feed creativity,
    unchecked, to the 1,001 things. Exactly, just let it go and relax into
    a new breath... As always, well spoken.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Hmm made me think...I'll have to come back and leave a more in depth response.
     
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