Life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Uff-Da, Feb 15, 2008.

  1. Uff-Da

    Uff-Da Member

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    The things I try, seem to not satisfy
    The things I do, seem to make things worse
    The things I wish, never seem to come true
    Why oh why must I be alone to cry?

    sitting here, wishing for more.
    Sitting here, wanting a friend.
    Sitting here, asking for help.
    Too bad too bad, It seems I've shut the door.

    Waiting still, I wonder why
    Waiting still, I wonder if
    Waiting still, I wonder how
    How long how long, will I last?

    Going to sleep, all these thoughts
    Going to sleep, wishing it would end
    Going to sleep, unsure
    Do I do I, really, want to wake?

    Save me please, this has to end
    Save me please, I can't go on
    Save me please, this is the end
    Tell me Tell me, is it worth it?
     
  2. HawkinsOrchestra

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  3. The Instinct

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    I really relate to this. If you ever need anyone to vent to, drop a line sometime just to vent, I'm here to listen. Is life worth it? I'm still pondering the same question. Seems to be worth it only when we get what we want....in my opinion, because struggles aren't to fun.
     
  4. green-hair-blue-eyes

    green-hair-blue-eyes Member

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    they'de make brilliant lyrics.
    dont ya think
     
  5. edenfield

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    ya i can relate,,,life sux at times, and yeh make good lyrics
     
  6. Johnnice

    Johnnice Member

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    i like this......
    but what is life?
    which is the meaning of life, WAITING OR FINDING?
    can you tell me...
     
  7. edenfield

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    winding
     
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