Lost in thoughts

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Sep 6, 2007.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Eyes open. The stench of stale vomit
    and urine hits my nostrils like a train wreck,
    as I walk through the neon-lit alleys.
    Jazz dances in the air, free
    and clear for me to enjoy.
    The pain of a city is almost
    Palpable in the atmosphere.

    Eyes closed. The scent of freshly
    cut green grass lingers as I stroll
    through a warm, inviting
    cement trail through purple and
    yellow and white flowers, welcoming
    me with every step I take.
    Paradise on Earth.

    Eyes open. Strangers shout
    at one another, cameras flash
    their bright, white lights as
    a young woman exposes her
    hard pink nipples for the crowds,
    cheap plastic beads shower down
    upon the victim of her own sexuality.

    Eyes closed. Hummingbirds
    dart and dash among the
    nectar filled lilacs, amongst
    the buzzing of honey bees
    and floating orange and yellow
    monarchs, just looking for
    their next meal.

    Eyes open. Clopping
    horses carry blue uniforms,
    watching out for mischief
    before it breaks out and
    becomes out of hand.
    A young man stumbles out
    of a bar, a clear cup full of
    coke and liquor rests in his
    Unsteady hands.
    A different, but equally
    beautiful paradise of a city.

    Peace and love
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Sounds like Ma-Da-Gra........

    I like the style this was done in.
     
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