this is one i found in the back of my sketchbook the other day, that i had wrote this summer, and had forgotten all about until now.... Dreaming swimming in you ocean, or rather drowning in your smile Floating drifting far from the ground, shooting for the stars. Glowing shining brighter than before. Contemplating Thinking thoughts of crazy love, and the nights we lost our minds. Smoke pot. thats how i found it, i kinda wanted to add more and take off that last line to make it more 'professional' more or less, but thats how i found it, and i decided to let it be...capture the memory
this is wonderful, reminds me of many smokey times.. then now and in the future i hope...... dont take the last line away thankyou love n peace from saff
Yeaah that last line is just kind of random there, I don't think it's a matter of "professionalism" more of a matter of choice and perception. To me it's just unecessary but if it captures what you were doing, etc then its ok.
yeah i dont think professionalism was the word i was looking for, but i was drawing a blank, but yeah it did capture the moment, cause my mind started wandering and i just kept thinking about how i wouldnt be writing right if i wasnt high at that moment
