Love and Light

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by NAhippie, Jan 12, 2009.

  1. NAhippie

    NAhippie Member

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    Specks of light, dancing
    on the tip of my finger
    Such a long strange trip,
    streaming straight from the sun
    For they are aware,
    of their great journey
    Isnt it time to shine back
    Our sun, wrapped up, lying in its' bed
    Lets step in harmony,
    With Love
    One Love,
    And we will change the world
     
    NAhippie, Jan 12, 2009
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  3. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    I like the idea of writing about the journey of the photons from the sun, but still, this poem left me cold.
     
    Bhaskar, Jan 12, 2009
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  5. spirit of the night

    spirit of the night Senior Member

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    its beautiful and simple, nice :)

    xxx
     
    spirit of the night, Jan 12, 2009
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