New Riff: A little help please?

Alright, I recently made a post, saying I had writer's block with making metal riffs... I came up with something on guitar, and I don't know if it's decent or if it's garabage... It's in 16th notes, and meant to be plaied at least 4x in a row on dropped D preferably, and can easily (AND PREFERABLY) be played as power chords in a dropped tuning. Can someone do me a favor?: Play this real fast and tell me if it sucks?



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I apologize that I do not know how to make tabs right... It's 4/4 time, all 16th notes... Played kind of fast.

 

I like it. I personalized it a bit with open triplets out of habit, but the fretted notes are good. Have you heard of Guitarpro?

 

Thanks a lot for the decent review. Yes, I LOVE guitar pro. I got a new computer so I must get it all over again, but I assure you I'll be all over than thing haha! When I get it, I could send you a tabbed version of what im putting that damn riff in... im trying to write my first song... hard work :-(

 

Cool. Piecing together songs is almost always a challenge for me, trying to pick the best match of riffs, haha.

 

I used to write a few songs some times ago, using FruityLoops. I'm decent at black and thrash metal riffs, but can't read notes or anything so I have no idea what your line of bracketed numbers would sound like.