Oh Gentleman

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LGH1288, Jan 28, 2011.

  1. LGH1288

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    Oh Gentleman, how dost thou see
    The sad and urgent side of thee?
    The forlorn chains that bind thy heart
    Are broken by the strength thou art!
    Oh Gentleman, how dost thou hear
    The crashing roar of waters near?
    Before the dawn the stars did shine
    On majestic planets betwixt thy mind.
    What if the chance to find thee here
    And only for this moment near?
    And if the path of truth were known
    Would it were you'd trod alone?
    Oh Gentleman, how dost thou speak
    With golden words strong and meek?
    Belay thy tears, betray thy fears,
    Stay thy course and grace thy years.
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    This is excellent work, with a nice lyrical flow. There are not nearly enough pieces written today in the older English forms. I love it.
     

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