Please

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by soulrebel51, Jul 9, 2004.

  1. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    I havent wrote any thing in over a month, maybe two I dont remember. I havent had the heart too, but this morning I picked up a pen and put it to the paper and the words just came. Tell me what you think, I call it "Please"

    Kill me now
    Ah, the pain is too much
    To end it now would be so sweet
    You ask me why, but the answer is obvious

    Kill the pain please,
    Even if it is the end for me
    Stop it now,
    T'would be so nice of you
    Now is the time,
    Everyday is agonizing
    Ready? I am.
     
  2. Purple_Burnt_Squirre

    Purple_Burnt_Squirre Member

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    I really like this it seems to me to mean so much like to me it could be about someone depressed, a terminly ill person or just someone whos having a bad day I think cause its short doesn't go into pacifics I found I had to read it a few times and think about it which is cool
     
  3. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    thank you, but actually it is about killing the pain that someone left me. and me too was confused after I wrote it
     
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