Ponder

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MaryGert, Sep 18, 2009.

  1. MaryGert

    MaryGert Member

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    The sand is rushing over me
    I feel the pressure of the salty ridges wash upon me
    This leaves me prickly and raw

    I go to this place
    So warm and clear to ponder

    I expect to find calmness
    I explore my fate, my decisions
    With every grain

    Are my choices really mine to make
    I move my body just before the pressure starts
    Maybe I can avoid the rugged edges

    I go to this place
    So warm and clear to ponder
     
  2. johnnykap

    johnnykap Member

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    Good one. It ties in nicely to my own epic work entitled A Grain of Sand. Perhaps we could collaborate on an anthology about the beach some day.
     

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