self-acception

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sunflowerAlys, Sep 10, 2004.

  1. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

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    this is my first attept at writitng the way i used to in a long long while. i had something that if i knew better wouldnt call a writers block but i dont.....:p




    I have pools and pools of self-acception, these days.
    While walking, I don't wish the flowers to be wilder, or more weathered.
    I have a mellow and indistinct sense of gratification;
    Indistinct: as I think of the past that seeped
    In vague missplaced intervals.
    Now, it is slightly cooler.

    Gone is the sea breeze- that's a cool shawl on sunburned piers
    I have left.
    Replacement is a musk of easterly wind that smokes through the weave of the clothes i ought not to be wearing.
    It is slightly colder.

    The dandelions are ready to be blown
    Ready to offer me the time with bowing bodies, heavy heads;
    Ready to oblige me with a fact that it's slightly too late. but
    These days, I have pools and pools of self-acception.
     
  2. wallflowergirl

    wallflowergirl Member

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    I can relate to this. I like it! :)
     
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