Tip of the iceberg she said. She was wrong. It was everything all at once. Coat, hat and scarf left right inside the door. I would have proposed a toast, had I had a glass and fork. Two short years are now equal to a lifetime, for as long as we both shall live. For as long as you both shall live. It's only half of a country she said, as she stepped onto the plane. A heart that has yet to witness adulthood, a naivety in close grasp of a brand new name. Onto the backburner. On with the back breaking. Sorry if I don't have the charm. Sorry if your second thought is committed to the west. I'm sure her waking hour has been spent with all the best. I'm sure she'll soon grow tired of asking me for second chances. It's her beauty that has been lost. It's her voice that will echo a stranger. Don't count me out. Sometime's to see the true beauty, all you have to do is just shake off the dust.
Thank you so much. I'm really rather shy when it comes to my writing. I don't always think they're good.
Sometime's to see the true beauty, all you have to do is just shake off the dust. my favorite lines.... i think you are an excellent writer....i've enjoyed all of what you've shared so far....
i never think anything i write is good. that's not the point though, the point is you keep writing even when you're not sure if its good, and writing is always good.
I guess you can say you know when a writer has lost inspiration when they can't find a flaw in their own work?
This is another gem. You've got talent, that's for sure. There's lots to like about this poem. I hope you continue to show your poems on here, even if you don't like them.
