sleeping in the ocean

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 2extreme, Jul 15, 2006.

  1. 2extreme

    2extreme Member

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    Staring into somber soulless space
    A decaying mind-muse
    Peaceful, seeping grace and
    Gazing night-time views

    A calm void of colour-stain
    Unheard voices, unknown motion
    Repressed reflections of pain
    Creeping into the bloodless ocean

    Waves pounding, pulling you with the sand
    Memories fading at the sea-shore's command

    Lying in a shivering chill
    It's too late, it's too late
    Cold-cut, diseased and ill -
    Cured as the Ocean's churn sedates

    Floating to a sea-struck fate
    Glaring into heaven's sky
    It's too late, it's too late, as
    Sleeping eyes watch sea gulls fly
     
  2. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Awesome piece, I love the seamless blend of the theme of dreams and the ocean. Keep up the good work!
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Wow, this is impressive. Nice work
     
  4. 2extreme

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    Thanks a lot.
     
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