Standing There

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GirlInTheGreenGrass, Feb 2, 2006.

  1. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    Standing there, watching you,
    hoping for you to see me...
    you're consumed by other things.

    Standing there, I'm crying inside.
    And it hurts that you don't notice.
    Don't notice that I'm standing there.

    Standing there Im screaming out your name
    But you cannot hear me...
    Does no sound come out?

    Standing there, you walk near me..then walk
    on by...
    I'm no longer standing. I'm on my knees,
    and the memories are unforgettable.
     
  2. TheLizardKingMike

    TheLizardKingMike Members

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    That was great. I think that's something that just about anybody can relate to. I loved it. Keep it up.
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Ummm... Aum.

    Sacred, holy, thank you.
     
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