Sun is over

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by AlawlessLulu69420, Jun 25, 2007.

  1. AlawlessLulu69420

    AlawlessLulu69420 Member

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    A bit random but my mind IS that...


    Can't let this feeling take over
    My friend is the breeze
    Im down on my knees
    Trying to satisfy the guy that abuses me
    Oh but faith is with me

    The sun still shines
    Day stil turns into night
    but i need peace of mind

    People are so dirty and vain
    and trying to come up with an image thats so lame
    they think they got it all
    but not when the loved one falls
    then its over
    the sun is over..

    I have no image
    I remain the same
    life is about secrets and money
    I want harmony
     
  2. Pastelroses

    Pastelroses Member

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    this is pretty good
    i like the randonmess
    but not soo keen on the rhyming
    xoxo
    Jenn
     

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