~The Land of the Golden Sands~

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by CrystalShip, Jun 10, 2007.

  1. CrystalShip

    CrystalShip Member

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    Sounds to me, that you see
    Whats beyond, and whats to be
    Why don't you,
    take my hand
    and show me the land,
    of the golden sands.
    Where the minds flee,
    and the hearts meet.
    Where the sun sets into the ocean slow,
    and comes out at dark with a shiny blue glow.
    The beaches are made of golden sands,
    and they are as long as you could ever glance.
    A calm soothing tune plays from the depth of the jungle,
    and people do nothing all day but make love and dandle.
    oh take me there please, I have no where to go
    oh take me there please, I have no where left to go
    oh take me there please, I really want to go
    There is no hope there, there is no despair
    Only joy and love, fill the air


    comments appreciated
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    I like this poem. It is very simple with a nice image.

    Peace and love
     
  3. guinea

    guinea Member

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    i want to go to the golden sands, it sounds like a beautiful serene place, it paints a very good mental image, thank you for the for the poem
     
  4. CrystalShip

    CrystalShip Member

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    Thanks for the comments :)
     

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