The Smile He Wears

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MyLifeIsJust, May 7, 2007.

  1. MyLifeIsJust

    MyLifeIsJust Member

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    The Smile He Wears
    By: MyLifeIsJust,,,

    He seems like a boring person, than he is...
    but nobody knows the life he lives
    above the smile he wears, are eyes of despair
    an undeveloped mind, and he wonders why he tries to care
    hes not sincere in speech, so he never dares to ask
    how to care, or how to love, instead he wears a mask
    when he speaks he leaks enthusiasm, he sounds dull instead
    even when hes happy, his zombie eyes prove his soul is dead
    and before he goes to bed, he smokes a bowl, his only friend
    suddenly.
    His feet begin to fly,reaching high,just beneath his once peachy sky
    he feels free to speak his mind with no mask to peek behind
    free he feels, but these moments dont last as long as life
    happy time is over, and his mind now knows wrong from right
    as his feet slowly reach the surface, his soul is weak and worthless
    he just seems hopeless, yet he holds a smile but doesnt see the purpose..
     
  2. divinessence7

    divinessence7 Member

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    very nice...weed tends to have the same effect on me. i'm a quiet person in reality, but i feel boundless after a blunt. too bad it doesn't last as long as life...
     
  3. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Very cool poem, words flow really well together. Nice job :)
     
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