The twelfth word

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bhaskar, Jul 10, 2007.

  1. Bhaskar

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    I sent eleven words
    to greet the sunset.

    Silence alone returned.
     
    Bhaskar, Jul 10, 2007
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  3. Littlwing70

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    Cool!
     
    Littlwing70, Jul 10, 2007
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  5. Julie Bukowski

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    Simple and stunning :)
     
    Julie Bukowski, Jul 10, 2007
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  7. sunshine_daydream07

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    it's amazing how only 3 lines of poetry can sound so beautiful!
     
    sunshine_daydream07, Jul 10, 2007
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    it's amazing how only 3 lines of poetry can sound so beautiful!

    :bandana:
     
    sunshine_daydream07, Jul 10, 2007
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  11. sylvanlightning

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    Simply beautiful :)
     
    sylvanlightning, Jul 14, 2007
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  13. jim kirby

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    short and sweet good stuff!
     
    jim kirby, Jul 17, 2007
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