to a friend

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Astridwantpeace, Oct 18, 2004.

  1. Astridwantpeace

    Astridwantpeace Member

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    I dont know if you can call it a poem..
    its translated from danish, so it might a little weird

    Back then i broke your heart
    - but i did'nt care

    my heart was of ice
    -you where real

    I still dont understand
    - i was so stupid

    I was in a bad company
    - but it was still me

    I was developing
    - in a weird way

    Now life has changed
    - we switched roles

    Now i'm looking at you
    - with out knowing

    i think your in the same developing
    - maybe in bad company

    I know i cant stop you, like you could'nt stop me

    But anyway´, when you are done i'll still be here.
     
  2. kidder

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    Amazing- the lure of the dark side! We feel compelled to embrace it and ignore the good. I guess we all want to be fallen angels. But are fallen angels ever able to be angels again?
     
  3. Astridwantpeace

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    yes.. we were good friends, i did the classical thing, kissing the guy she really liked.
    It was so not me, but did it, and did'nt feel a shamed back then.. and i still dont, as much as i really want to.
     
  4. kidder

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    Well, you'll never get to heaven but you'll make life interesting here!
     
  5. Kikærter

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    Vil du være sød og poste den på dansk? (sorry, my danish is not good but I am trying)
     
  6. Astridwantpeace

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    Dengang knuste jeg dit hjerte
    - jeg var ligeglad

    Mit hjerte var af is
    - dit var ægte

    jeg forstår det stadig ikke
    - jeg var så dum

    jeg var i dårligt selvskab
    - men det var stadig mig

    jeg var i udvikling
    - på en underlig måde

    Nu har tingene ændret sig
    - vi har byttet roller

    Nu ser jeg dig
    -uden at vide

    jeg tror du er i den samme udvikling
    - måske i dårligt selvskab

    Jeg ved jeg ikke kan stoppe dig, ligesom du ikke kunne stoppe mig

    men alligevel, når du er færdig, er jeg har stadig
     
  7. lakshen

    lakshen Forn Siðr

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    Jeg kan bedre li det på dansk :)

    But yeah, nice poem :D
     
  8. Mordiana

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    Looks better in danish although I dont'really understand that language. But its beautiful; I feel sorry for your friendship
     
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