today...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Aug 14, 2007.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    to all...

    visualize what may be,here
    a world of poverty..not
    grown to love,to bend on knees
    starving ,craving love .not free.

    moan,i have tis time ,but done.
    no shelter for weakness,the
    dead all gone.forgoten times.
    bleeding for them.did blind
    the human for oh,so long...

    a path not taken lightly,has
    broken dreams this eternal
    theme.does drive us deeper
    into wounds,sacrifice those
    who see...we all do.....

    thank you
    lovenpeace from saff

    today cold memories of a world so torn
    may burn my soul even more.
    our children do grow in complete human war
    to stand together is all.....
    it can be achieved this can be done.

    thats all..
     
  2. thcinfectedhair

    thcinfectedhair Member

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    wow man that was a really deep poem. it had great flow and immagery. it captures your attention quickly i think i read it a couple times.
     
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