to all... visualize what may be,here a world of poverty..not grown to love,to bend on knees starving ,craving love .not free. moan,i have tis time ,but done. no shelter for weakness,the dead all gone.forgoten times. bleeding for them.did blind the human for oh,so long... a path not taken lightly,has broken dreams this eternal theme.does drive us deeper into wounds,sacrifice those who see...we all do..... thank you lovenpeace from saff today cold memories of a world so torn may burn my soul even more. our children do grow in complete human war to stand together is all..... it can be achieved this can be done. thats all..
wow man that was a really deep poem. it had great flow and immagery. it captures your attention quickly i think i read it a couple times.