I rode my Harley by myself today I'm a fairly new rider bout a year to the day Went to the beach couldn't take my chair was nervous at first until I got there Stuck my toe in the water and took up my pen haven't felt freer since I don't know when You're never too old or stuck in your ways to do something new on a very nice day
very good poem, i just bought a bike myself. am taking a trip from oklahoma to california, within the next month i hope i am able to do as you have. sit with my feet in the sand and water and write. take care
When I saw the title, being a male, I'm thinking, beautiful, this is a poem about some guy deflowering chicks, awesome. But I enjoyed it anyhow. You are the second most prolific poet on this site, Mary.