Virgin Rider

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MaryGert, Sep 7, 2009.

  1. MaryGert

    MaryGert Member

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    I rode my Harley by myself today
    I'm a fairly new rider
    bout a year to the day

    Went to the beach
    couldn't take my chair
    was nervous at first
    until I got there

    Stuck my toe in the water
    and took up my pen
    haven't felt freer
    since I don't know when

    You're never too old
    or stuck in your ways
    to do something new
    on a very nice day
     
  2. dosia

    dosia Visitor

    very good poem, i just bought a bike myself. am taking a trip from oklahoma to california, within the next month i hope i am able to do as you have. sit with my feet in the sand and water and write. take care
     
  3. MaryGert

    MaryGert Member

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    Thanks, and good luck with your new bike!!
     
  4. johnnykap

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    When I saw the title, being a male, I'm thinking, beautiful, this is a poem about some guy deflowering chicks, awesome.

    But I enjoyed it anyhow. You are the second most prolific poet on this site, Mary.
     
  5. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    Whos the first?
     
  6. MaryGert

    MaryGert Member

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    Thanks, it is what it is!!!:)glad you enjoyed it anyway.
     

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