White Crow

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, May 30, 2005.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    WOW!
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I agree with what Lozi said :)
     
  3. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    Beautiful. Lovely images.
     
  4. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    at's a whole lotta lovely!
     
  5. Zion

    Zion Member

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    Yeah sir, Youv'e got depth and reach, Im glad you not lettin it go to wASTE. You know its well appreciated. I think you and Bob Dylan could be friends, I hope you paint or make films or music or something, cause you have the mental capacity. Best wishes and love regardless
     
  6. Biida

    Biida Member

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    I want to be your number one fan. These words, these images, they take my breath away.
     
  7. _chris_

    _chris_ Marxist

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    that really is some amazing stuff
     
  8. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    -playa- was my favorite from your latest, there's a vibe to it I relate to, and the language is perfect. The images stick in the head and evoke pleasant memories... thanks for that!

    simply beautiful... you have such excellent taste :)
     
  9. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Thank you for all that is here. I haven't been wandering this way lately as I have felt rather depleted. This helped feed that part of me that has been lacking lately.
     
  10. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    -Wings of experience- is overwhelming and breathes of the unreal.
    -Sleeping in- made me want to go to sleep now.
     
  11. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    "I wrenched DOG backwards to find GOD; now GOD barks."

    Throw a DOG a bone.
     
  12. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    In any case, you could see but only a shadow. Appearing was never a specialty of mine.
     
  13. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    *claps* yay, i dig it
     
  14. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Ty for the beautiful moment.
     
  15. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    oh to live in your mind andy....such a beautiful place.
     
  16. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    that breaks my heart
     
  17. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thank you etherealeyez. You are quite articulate, in all you share.
    In particular, how do you feel I could improve 'Mystic Gardener?'
     
  18. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    These three were my favorite but the whole thing is as beautifully told as being there. Thank you for the walk outside today.


    Enjoyed Lilith very much. The last two stanzas really stood out for me.
     
  19. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I did some modifications. I remember fulmah enjoying the old version. Thought I would bring it full circle with polishing. I'm almost surprised anyone commented.

    I'm glad you enjoyed 'Speechless.'
     
  20. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Well, I rather needed the walk outside, even if it was vicariously thru your words. Really was too hot to do any other way today, lol~*
     
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