yet another

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Superpimp, Aug 21, 2010.

  1. Superpimp

    Superpimp Member

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    Sleepless nights
    Unseen troubles
    Mental red lights
    debilitating state of mind
    People asways asking
    me always lieing
    Fuck being alright!
    Im not alright!
    Twisted thoughts plaguing troubled minds
    deliver me from this evil
    distorted sence of time
    losing minutes to hours
    hours to nights
    losing myself to this affliction
    tonight part of me dies
    surrounded by a cloud of darkness
    i can slowly see the light
    peaking thru
    i start to rise
    part of me lives
    to live another day
    to die another night...
     
  2. Heavenly Bohemian

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    Its good, but stay away form the razor blades : ) lol ...... J.K about the razor blades!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. Superpimp

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    lol no razor blades over here anymore, i got past that fairly easy.....just findig it easyer to vent via poetry these days.....as as u an see this shit needed out of my head....
     
  4. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    very good pacing. keep up the good work lad.

    YOu should keep all your stuff in a single thread...easier to track down your stuff when I want to read. just saying.

    Twisted thoughts plaguing troubled minds

    I like this
     
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