because we all know reefer is more decaying to society than child rape, right?
what kind of band are you guys? this would sound good in a variety of styles, but my first thought was "bluesy."
i think i'm joking, and i think you need to realize that, although vikings do kick quite a lot of ass.
the audience memebrs call him a cracker-ass white boy and threaten him. he should stick a counter-suit up their ass for slander based on...
i wish all cops were vikings. at least then they'd have an excuse for the raiding, raping, killing, and bribing. and vikings kick ass.
why thankyou.
shhh... logic has no part in poetry. i'm enjoying the pretty birds.
thankyou.
you have every right to think that, but why would that be?
apparently noone cares about the sad dragon...
not tryin' to be hatin', it's just that it seems like evry time i find a new writing forum people overrun it with freeverse essays which they...
it'll probably be more fun to find it in a couple of years anyway.
pretty pretty image. one thing i'm liking about the poetry forum-not everyone posts freeverse, which i expected them to do. the second to last...
it's very good, but if you want us to point out things that you could improve on, there re a couple of words that should be changed either because...
"Sad Dragon" he screams, he cries, he rolls his eyes but noone cares about a sad dragon. he stomps and shouts "i want to die!" but noone cares...
well, thanks. i feel all warm and bubbly inside now :).
pretty sweet. had lots of fun figuring out what some of the stuff could be, or how it was all connected.
it's a newer show, but i miss "invader zim." i loved that show, man.:(
goddamn, man, you're getting beaten beyond belief in your own poll... why do you care about other people's two-week-old lumps o' flesh? it's not...
i know the rhyme scheme is a tad out of sync, but i stand by not fixing what isn't broken. thankyou very much for the praise:) .
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