Pretty good, I can relate, but then I question when it's over with when I'm done making myself feel bad: Was the relationship all that worth it?...
I really relate to this. If you ever need anyone to vent to, drop a line sometime just to vent, I'm here to listen. Is life worth it? I'm still...
I agree with Redyelruc. Short, simple, to the point, and when it's done right, it's done good, and that you did with this one.
interesting way of expressing your feelings. Deep choice of word structure.
I really liked this. Kept me reading until the end. Maybe because I feel the same type of anger. Good job none the less.
took me a couple times to read it, maybe I'm slow or something. You have a good idea. Good release. I personally was wanting a bit more of an...
I think you used these lines a bit too much, I did the same idea before using the same lines...it kind of takes away a bit of the poem, the...
Take yourself on a mental journey, There is no right or wrong answer, However, The first thought is most truthful. I am your guide... Answer each...
Here is one of my most recent poems: Boom B O O M! Did you hear a bomb? Maybe thunder, Or a car crash? Possibly a fist in your face, And...
I read the first one and liked it a lot, if your looking for advice, I may not be the best to give it nor anyone else, but sometimes a pointer is...
I would have to agree
I realized my old thread of all my favorite authors and titles may not work out but in any event I'm curious what other readers have thought of...
I fully agree, I know a court system here that didn't agree with that however....and I see it many times that the court system doesn't always...
well that's just the point isn't it? I wanted a thread dedicated to just my own because random thoughts are well "random" that come from nowhere....
thanks, I appreciate it, any others that you liked? That goes to anybody who reads this as well. May give me some more inspiration to write others...
this is one on my list of people to be hit.
Here is my random thought # 2...err or questions Should a mother get charged as well as the father for child abuse if she knowingly knew the...
# 1 :mad: Sometimes I get so frustrated with the supidity of people I just want to get up, run around, and start hitting people across their...
I'm currently reading "Phantoms", I have a question though about this book. I picked it up used and on the cover it says that it's now a motion...
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