Just realised I said "Platinum chill" before, I meant Jedi. Ok, maybe I was wrong about Fight Club... LOL, what happens in Nightmare On Elm Street...
Platinum chill, I've got no rage, I can bash films in the movie forum...just venting, jeeze..and I'm not 15 (wtf?) I only said the word...
So would helpful advice on a poem you didn't like be like "that sucked, make it better" or soemthign? Or should it be personal, you know, like "i...
Why do birds sing first thing in the morning? It's not the usual mating calls and whatnot...like roosters crow at the sun, or wolves howl at the...
Skipkickin' down the skidmark Billygoat bray And vomit splaying out guts On to street and sidewalk splatter Bugs and vermin worm crawling See...
Ratchet hacking normalcy Inward and escaping Air flowing liquid out Water top hatchets Endless loops of trivia games Themeshow mark-up pricing...
"wrapped up in cellophane stay inside, for fear of toxic rain, paper cuts & flying menstral pains" Thats good
Just thought I should mention...uh...I wrote this about a year ago (bump).
"he only looked them in the eyes instead of their tits and asses" Yah, I thought of that. I dunno, why do you come to a strip club, if not to see...
Only been twice, and they suck. Having topless girls come and ask you questions, as if they're really interested, sucks. They kept coming by,...
Woops sorry for double post.
Am I the only one who thinks so? Particularly girls w/ hairy, sweaty armpits? K, it even sounds gross when I type it. But it's not. It's hot, I...
Accidentally double posted...
"And bloom outwards in the vintage sun and Native toungue Flowing towards the magnetic ending of sparkling burning eternity" Like it a lot,...
I like it
I gotta say i like it, especially how it flows. Especially the lines "Every waterhorse fly, passing by in the wind, every hour in the Sun melts...
Here we are now in this moment conscious and perceiving Why am I ? That’s why For an instant everything opens up unfolds and reveals a glimpse...
You ROCK. Thanks.
I also really like the poem under your pic. You write that too?
I like this a lot.
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