There is little to no understanding up in here.
this had a good flow of thought, easy read. I liked the images and the tone you set.
Too many words, but interestingly dull...your first 6 lines read like a tongue twister. lots of cool snippets here and there. Our world is made...
Im just a phyco with deadly habbits Im in love with bad bitches I liked these lines...good poem, well written.
chill poem...I want to know more about this graduation that is causing you to stay up late thinking.
So this is about your uncle then ? If he is under her roof then it's on him to obey the rules set out. This is just my opinion.
I should explain why I thought the rest was meh after the third line. It is because the first three are legitimately good in my book, then with...
I hope things between you and your grandmother improve
first three lines were good...after that meh
what do you think Duck ? Hot November I saw the sky churning as oceans of ashes Turning down rays of fire, fallout & flashes Burning up the...
Porcelain boy SOLDIER If I never talked I wouldn't listen more Cos I'm that fresh, frozen dialog Of conversations unspoken Between contention...
I'm a pundit of orchestral table scraps the arbitrary tremors of afterthought in the second balcony, forty-second row nose bleeding, I occupy...
Six operated the greater plan they all... Picked pocketed a paper bag In it was... A girl hominid...behavior bad! whom... Gets closeted in...
poetry is not therapy...remember you are sharing with people in the hopes they gain something. Still, nice poems. You must being going through...
I don't think your disdain for society reflects welll in your writings because you are not being honest in bringing out your emotion. Do that, and...
I thought this was well thought out and placed. The only thing was that I think you could have shown some of this tension other than saying it...
as always Duck, I really appreciate you reading and commenting. Thank you. Son was only used to get that line to rhyme, "Lion/Lie son"...lol
It rained last night and the garden is moist Smells like smoke and it smells so clean The sun is shining like a white friendly light
The large banner above read: "Stand Up To Hunger" or some shit like that stitched with corporate logos reminding you continually of who puts on...
http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_13478777 new track by artist G.L. Mulings, 'jeremy pivens'
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