welcome :)
I like it.
It's a good poem, looks like you have potential. Keep writing and see if you can improve yourself... :)
pain pain pain hurt rage death cry laugh cry scream cut bleed drink drug drug burn fall slip scream scream cry bite cut burn smash hit kill rage...
yeah very nice, i can definitely relate to that one.
nice poem
love the poem, as usual :)
Aww fuck him this whole thread's a waste now cos he cheated on me!!! fuck :(
thanx guys, @ jim: yeah ur right it was an earlier one, i think when i was about ten...? yeah well thanx, luv ya back! :)
:) Maybe I am cool! lol :)
Cool poem :) Its confusing, but that's not necessarily a bad thing...
it forms a nice fuzzy picture in my mind of a happy person! :) Good poem!
cant find the words to say what i want their stuck in my soul wont go down to release through my fingers wont form to say what i need to say...
i like that poem! i wish i was near a beach lol!
It's really good, I like this line: "what's the point in fighting -when there's nothing to row about". Nice point. :)
I want people to respond...I chose nervous because alot of times I'll show my poetry to someone and they'll laugh or tell me I suck... But so far...
hey welcome! :)
maybe your depressed and feel comfortable with it. or maybe your just depressed. but if youre not and you want depression, take some of mine, id...
ive seen better from you, but this ones excellent as well, i dont think ive seen a horrible one from you yet! :)
i didnt know you did poetry! now i feel dumb...that was great! pleeease post more?? :) its expressive and emotional, in other words brilliant...
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