First I can see that you try to contradict the bible...you can not do it and you didn't achieve that , if that is in fact what you set out to do....
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I ask the mods to leave this up, please. If you like to rhyme and write stories, if you like weekly competition against a variety of skill...
Actually, I don't mind that you interpreted this as an abstraction. Hower, I must disagree because the OP was written to be my wisdom of truth in...
Mmmmk. I agree. thanks for the thoughts.
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I think that I copied this from another form that I write in is why...lol What did you think dope
I can figure out to rid them
And so I look up to the stars And each cluster represents arbitrary patterns Some of nostalgia in a spiritual place Where the past, present and...
Wake Up Spirits ! I want to be happy so I smile more, even if to fake it Face a mirror for support but its stare back is vacant I count the...
I used to be and besides that I liked the passage because it rolled well and it hit the right mental spots. What's your name mean ?
^you really got to stick it out to reap any rewards here, things are a long time coming here. lol
Started this well, now Im very tired so Im gong to bed. In otherwords, this is a work in progress. ---- The right fist I use writes left with a...
keep it up...I liked this a lot Maybe the truth is in Numbers and Equations Maybe in Sight and Sound Perhaps in these voices, beat by pound that...
well I certainly do not want to hold back and I really think that if you leave honest thoughts and feed back the author would appricate that more...
Pretty much hit the nail on the head there.
forget ending in cognitive dissonance, get right into that subconscious. There is a black hole of stuff to draw out... Are you "stressed" out...
I'd take this free writing and do something with it, because as this stands its not really doing much, other than being an ensemble of words.
damn, duck, thanks for the love. I was listening to Stair Way to Heaven when I was reading your feedback...The second development of the songs...
ohhhh, I have a new youtube account. I only have three vids up though, until I get a HD cam that is... true ture , right right. yup , yup
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