Very good insight. Considering we are very related in DNA , the same behavior of stock piling goods selfishly might of stood the same way with the...
I doubt there is a standard
BumP ! I think alone' was your most coherent poem. Now, don't ask my why, but it left me with an image of a familiar home--moar specifically,...
your style is self-reflection, mirrored out as social commentary of our distancing origins and all i can say is wow haha are your works published?
To those commenting on topic- I know the OP is full of holes and all, and one of the biggest is that being a hoarder does not necessarily mean you...
Unequivocal success- three centuries too late.
what if you could barter the shit for other shit that wouldnt rot? like spears?
I was just thinking that today's hoarders ( as paraded on tv) would have been very prominent during the days we overlapped with the Neanderthals....
I know you're not. And i should have said the poem doesn't understand and not you, sorry if I offended. you're young yet, maybe down the road it...
rereading this I understand that duck is not fimilar with one world government agendas.
aight,i edited the poemage. I switched vine ripe tomades with pred humming boiddy. ok, let's start commenting on this shit...it's my first poem...
I like the ironic opposites throughout...oxymorons?
<3 u meliai changes made :)
I like turtles
I'm a pundit of orchestral table scraps the arbitrary tremors of afterthought in the second balcony, forty-second row nose bleeding, I occupy...
Hey thanks kitten. I agree with you. I put considerably less focus on meaning than I do with the sounds and control of the rhyme schemes --I'm...
ahhh, makes perfect sense. You do know your shit don't ya? good stuff.
Synchronize my exterior to display nothing but superior superlatives, disguising our eyes only after our interiors were certainly sure we did. All...
<3 u kittenx
Well I'll be damned. You decided to share something with us after all. Thank you! ------------------------- I applaud you. Doing poetry with...
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