! That's cute! I like the wittiness =)
Absolutely man. They are little tokens of creativity I think. I'm sorry if my tone was a little douche (I've been working on changing that) but I...
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What's the feeling? What's the message? What's this soposed to be? help me by answering these.
If the reader has to struggle to find acceptance in a work such as flow, pace and tempo then the author has failed. A work should have a...
I'm not a fan of this. You have captured and imitated the best of what being cliché buys and overall, you have copied the stereotype of what the...
Life is a game pal. We all live in a matrix. Take a look around you and see everything so unnatural to the essentials of human existence....
Sorry to hear that bro. But, thinking back on it, isn't it such a positive and powerful memory? Though, it was a rough time, it was a cornerstone...
thanks bb gun. you are going to be good material to play on.
My bad b. I understand and respect that. But did you know what I meant in my crtique, if not I can redo it with a much cooler tone. Serious....
lolz. it was not bad writing as my head is not too sore. It just was not very clever or surprising. but good writing I cant take away....but ask...
oh what a silly poem. Because you tried so hard with the con imagine presentation, too hard in fact, it worked! Though, to be honest, I really...
Good flow but poor content. Nothing stood out. Just a text message prettied up and posted on a poetry board really. Keep trying kiddo.
Oh, and to be honest with you I think that your poem in the Op is pretty bad in fact. It's clichéd to the max, offers no new insight to an...
lol "but chill" I like you already. Yes, yes, keep writing man.
you two sound like the same person in your correspondence. just sayin.
thanks 2daw and isoisidorus my Ole chaplains.
yes it's nice to have it back.
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you are obsessed with the desert of amercia...the world is bigger than that.
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