these lucid dreams leave Ginsburg incomplete half devoured by dehydration, a skeleton to his cynicism an ox ghost, strewn out over desolate desert...
Thanks alot! Might I just say thought that "the blue note's a devil" is referring to the note being a devil.
acid hits the bloodstream like sulfur beaming, burning my mind with archetypes and demons teaming with inexplicable explanations people, places,...
Well the title is cliched to bits. I just think it'd be great to know what PARTS are cliched. The topic discussed in the poem isn't even suicide.
Fuck yea! Recycle that cum!
I keep having reccurring dreams of cloud formations and constellations(aglow), CRASHING into this life this earth mass, maybe birthing maybe...
...No. How is it cliched?
It's NOT in our nature, it's in our nurture. We were raised to do it, and so we do it. History however has proven us somewhat... bastardly.
Either I'm really in the no or you are all out. Only ones I hadn't heard of were Buchenwald and Mannequins Breathe. I actually laughed when...
Actually he turned homophobic.
Aesop sucks? You obviously know shit about rap. Maybe he's going to fast for you, read his lyrics. They are laden with constantly amazing and...
Much MUCH better. You really strengthen the whole piece up by fixing that last part and adding another stanza. However lonely doesn't sound...
That is how I critique. I'm sorry if I hurt anyones fragile sense of self but well, when you post your shit on a forum, you take that risk. Those...
More htan happy to oblige. ;) It's really a terrific scene until teh last stanza. I think besides that last part it's all great, near perfect I'd...
2CE, in my expirience, is like acid with a wicked body high. Although I still prefer acid because of the sheer boost in intelligence, I would pick...
Ahhh classic political poetry. Only thing I will knit pick about is the lack of stanzas and line breakage but honestly, that doesn't really...
Poetry, being an art form, is naturally open for critique. I did not argue with the views he expressed simply the manenr in which he was...
I am noone to tell you to do it but hwne someone posts poetry and gets this many good comments for absolute trite well... someone has to step in....
Considering it was after multiple hits of white on white you were at hte time probably legally insane. Every time you do acid I beleive you get a...
Yes I do actually. You live in minnesota? I live in minneapolis.
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