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That was perfect, precisely what we would expect of you. Really, a fantastic job. Maybe you should write more. You said you enjoy poetry in...
I love the title, but shouldn't there be more? Will you add more to this piece?
It's controversial. It's clever. It's good. Could probably use a little more structure (just my opinion).
Life Begins Oh the pressure, the pain of the squeeze It would bring an adult down to their knees The light is so bright, the air a cool...
What a great piece. So many people have had to go through this.
OK. Guess I shouldn't have stated the obvious. Oooppssss :-)
I don't think they got it yet. Your opening post is a (non-rhyming) 5-7-5 haiku. Clever.[img]
Well, if you cannot communicate your ideas in the written form, then coming to this forum probably isn't one of your better ideas. Try calling a...
Fantastic.
Maybe this guest is looking for work. Paint my house.
Another great work of art.
You're welcome.
Remember that night When I couldnt catch a cab it was pouring rain And Id forgotten my bag That was when I should of moved on But instead I...
The open tomb seemed (to me) like it was going to go somewhere else. The "Different" is how more than 50% of marriages end up. I can relate to...
Let it ride. But in the future, never say to her, "I knew he was no good for you, because of what he wrote...". It's part of gtrowing up and...
Ask a moderator or administrator to lock his threads.
Were you (are you) late in starting puberty? Parts of the body grow during puberty. Things like under arm hair and pubic hair start to come in,...
WOW (in a good way).
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