He understood children's darker side. Contemporary stuff doesn't seem to have it. JM Barrie had it. Peter Pan is sick. Not a big fan of his adult...
paragraphs? TAPS might help... but I can't remember what that stands for... time/action/place...subject?
Got creeped out at the hand on the doorknob. Liked that "we can tell you apart" [sic] (did I use 'sic' right?), but she can't. I've got various...
I would have answered: "Why don't you believe in unicorns or five-testicled-rodents-of-unusual-size (they glow in the dark, you know)?"
Are You Being Served? Twin Peaks (first series) Blackadder Northern Exposure Ballykissangel (Bally-K!) Classic ER
Mainly cello, plus piano, and bits of steel drums, 'lectric bass, tin whistle, as well as the tiniest amounts of mandolin, guitar, harmonica (got...
I felt exactly the same way as you most of the time I was sixteen, plus feeling shy and awkward and unconfident and not particularly attractive,...
yeah? What do you think about the capital "N" in North? Couldn't make up my mind to use capitals for both Norths, or neither, or if just one which...
Don't tempt me.
From what you've said I don't know if you'll be able to get a restraining order against her (I don't know a lot about this), but even if you...
I agree with the above. (Gave up at "scampered", which I doubt is the word you want to use.) For EXAMPLE, the first sentence, at the very least,...
Be a strong independent woman! It's liberating. First time I asked someone out I was over the moon and it had hardly anything to do with the fact...
Wendigo eats: moss, frogs, people, mushrooms it’s cunning and quick heart of ice (must burn when killed) snowshoe prints doesn’t speak (can’t or...
So are you looking for feedback or just throwing your drunken adolescent feelings into the digital ether and hoping for... what? ps. I have total...
I't certainly no more dull than most other things around here
No insulting criticism, just insulting by being too polite to say anything upfront.
my main points are it's "too shy", not "to shy" you don't need to put a comma, at the end of every line and perhaps it should be your "way of...
The computer? I guess that makes some sense. But sometimes the computer's pace and stress and intonation is completely nuts, and if you get five...
No! You know you're a writer because you come off odd in social situations because you're constantly thinking that would make a great story and...
Read your work aloud to yourself. Don't be afraid of deleting things you're attached to but doesn't fit. Be aware of what's implicit. When it...
Separate names with a comma.
