very nice
Time for pleasure to pour itself from a faucet Swirling like a miniature typhoon Down the bathtub’s drain Let’s get these seeds into the fresh...
Cargo travels across the cold Atlantic I stow away among valuables in the belly of a ship Portholes are my only reference to the open water...
Is life not loved for it’s simple pleasures? I am a revolutionist born in a time period of followers I want blood I want to stab with a sheathed...
I'm really starting to hate the sound of my own mind and the people here, they dont got what Im looking for. I dont look for it, but the...
Love is a four letter lie And it’s twinging me between the eyes There are some nights when I can’t fall asleep And don’t want to wake up alive...
I imagine you as not a father, or mother, son, or even the undelivered sister. Only possibility, A deadly gaseous poison, unseen, unscented, and...
fall/winter. i wish i could explain in words how it makes me feel is it in you now to watch the things you gave your life to broken? then stoop...
and red, i love your feedback. that is the best feedback i have recieved, and your posting of that part of "The Air is Cut with Cyanide" really...
i really like this poem! for your first one, i have to admit you have vast potential, i couldnt agree more with some of the statements made....
idk. it sounds like a lot of forced rhymes, and some good one liners, but on the whole it feels like a bunch of lines that have not much to do...
ah. someone to kiss because that is EXACTLY how im feeling atm. its like you invaded my mind and stole my thoughts. and i remember you because it...
Am I wasting my time? You are a fool. You hide. You’re set on matter over mind And I can only help you to help yourself You are starving...
your writing is beautiful, and quite unique. alcatraz is by far one of my favorite poems on the forums
=] i really love it, im gonna go get my fur mocassins and go give out hugs
I hold true to myself that no matter what happens I will always be fascinated by the lewd schoolyard bully bunch They magnify prowess stupidly...
wow . ur fucking innovative, i love it all
i miss you kitten! post something =[
Phew, that was close. No time to brake Escaping ghosts. But they just can't Be left behind They ride within My guilty mind. -i really like this...
Air to breathe Rivers to bridge In hearts that love falsely Intending to live When collisions occur Antagonists and heroes Never give High Low...
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