....free to fight for love. This is my favorite poem of yours so far. I wish I had a guitar so I could set it to music. Then again, I wish I...
description allows us the vision to see a poem. You nailed that. I enjoyed this. "Attic Refugees" "Star of David In a pen" Awesome. Keep writing!...
:) Thanks all of you.
We're on another planet somewhere, just you and me, connecting dotted stars as we dance...making love without gravity. Forgetting how we got here,...
ehh it wasn't so morbid. Don't you worry:) I liked your poem. They may burn you, crack and bend you, but you keep on fighting for that light....
I'm flattered that I inspired you DreamChaser. Your poem was stellar. Thank you. And hey, you can stay, they'll see;) Thanks all of you......
thanks for thinking so. :) Possibilities are endless.
She was sitting there, lost in the world that she is. The world she could never allow anyone inside. She was sitting there and he walked up to...
"And yet I still remain hopeful only to be crushed repeatedly beneath the waves of her indifference." The whole poem spoke simply to me. I'm...
Very raw and direct. :) thanks for sharing. peace&<3
Standing there, watching you, hoping for you to see me... you're consumed by other things. Standing there, I'm crying inside. And it hurts that...
Streched out in the tall grass, I make shapes out of the clouds. I can hear the wind whistle as if to let me know it likes my presence here. It...
"the world needs to be whole to hold each human safe to let all live in love and given the chance we would love again....... we will come again...
It was raining that night you walked into my life. So hard that I couldn't see you coming. And when you stopped there in front of me... so did the...
thanks guys:)
aww whoever 'he' is, I feel like him sometimes. I liked how you ended it. It was a great message:) Thanks for sharing it. peace&<3
:) I have always wished I could get something out onto paperwhen I would to trip. It seemed like things were too far out of my reach to grasp and...
smoking too much weed everyday. I feel like I get nothing done. I'm sleeping inside. ;)
I read them all, but the first was my favorite. Snowboarding rules, and you described it better than I could imagine it. The way you ended the...
oh wow. I was somewhere else I guess. With my peice or something...:) How I percieved your poem and what you sent out were two completely...
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