Shhhh Listen I have something to say. Hush Be quiet Softly as it may. I want paint on my fingers And grass stains on my clothes. I...
you're absolutley right. thanks for your advice.:)
hm...its a thought
I'm not satisfied, I wander if I'll ever be, I hope to be... :) My studies are not effortless and they're sure not complete. Expression helps get...
When I'm really sad, everything around me is. It's harder to appreciate the wind. My emotion takes over...and that...well that's unfortunate....
Wind scattered words...so many.
it was short and focused...unresolved...made me wander. :) That's about it. Nice peice. <3
is that a sarcastic remark?
I can relate to this. It's like you try to change something, motivate yourself to do good and evolve...but there's a force that's always holding...
what do you mean? What does the fly represent? I guess in the picture it might look like a fly.. like your pupil is it's body and around it are...
The dead birds are a huge impact on the poem and how I felt. They represent death...darkness... It starts off 'warm and attractive' because that...
aww. Love to you as well friend.
well if the bacon makes you feel good when you're feeling shitty, then eat the bacon man...but don't ever, EVER eat the bacon if it starts working...
What is this inside me That burns and burrows so deep. It distracts me from what is It's something I know I mustn't keep. I need to know the...
and then we all thank the forum...:rolleyes:
As I step out into the beauty I can feel the sun warm on my face I can hear the birds singing to eachother This is such a beautiful place. As I...
i was there with you;)
good imagery. I like how you compared yourself to this tree. And society to oppression. The tree is alive too.
Kind of shocking...the homeless man needs love too.
Who are you? Why do you look at me that way? Was it the way I moved...the expected words I didn't say? Why are you here? Why didn't I get to...
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