Chapter 5 The sun shown down on the little picket fence that laid around the out skirts of the garden. Elizabeth looked at the bed next to...
Chapter 4 I looked at my alarm the next morning; I wasn’t able to sleep at all because of the previous day’s events that still lingered in...
Chapter 3 I got on the bus and stared aimlessly out the window. The bus screeched when parking in the parking lot. My bus driver Mrs....
Chapter 2 The next morning I woke with the start of my alarm clock. I tapped it and jumped out of bed. About five minutes later I ran...
This book is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are products of the author’s imagination or are used fictionally. Any...
Hello I made a post previously to this one. I posted a few paragraphs out of my story and asked if you thought I had talent in writing. Alot of...
yeah ill post the full story on a new thread called The Hidden Runaway Constructive Critisim Needed
wow thanks for all the feedback greatly appreciated
lol
say my number was 07772323333 (its not, its an example) so they wud type in 0114407772323333 to ring me? (remeber i am in the uk)
If you wanted to ring someone who was in the United Kingdom off your cell phone what code do you put in before you type in their cell phone number???
Classic LOL
rofl classic "Because they just scream better when you hack them up with a chainsaw...." Absolutly halarious
You told her you were on drugs!!! LOL okay, you need to say everything you just said to us, to her, I think she will understand the situation alot...
It's perfectly normal and fine, as long as you do not act on these crushes.
I think the door has closed and you should move on, unless you try extreamly hard and she forgives you. But some of us do not posses the power of...
Are you telling me you think she should run away from her problem? That isn't going to work, he will eventually find out where she moved to and he...
It seems to me he is only after the sex? But that is just from what I read. The only advice I think I can give from the point of view given is...
I have made another thread with my full story in it. Its called 'The Hidden Runaway - Constructive Critisim Needed, Thanks!'
Should I post my story on another thread? Then maybe I could get truthful feedback? Or will nobody bother reading it? It's about 12 pages long...
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