brilliant, loved it
sweet story :D but sadly i can't play the guitar, so i can't guess what it sounds like as a song
i love the ideas presented in this poem, i think it would improve with a bit of editing (lots of repetition of door), but overall i found it...
The silence said it all. Her sister was dead and mine was alive, I couldn’t give the one thing I could lend to see her smile. Her leg was...
beautiful. i've always thought there was something more to washing lines..:p
i have a feeling that the lack of subtlety at the end of this poem kind of ruins it.. what do you think? Toddy Corridor lit with sallow...
very sad, even more so because stuff like that actually happens :( i felt some of the rhyming was a bit forced, but otherwise its brilliantly...
never got what some people's problems are with bras.. they're warm and comfy! Better than swinging around.. that's jst god damn painfull. and...
this made me smile:)
i just think "thrashing flames" sums up a flame perfectly, the way it flickers so angrily when you gently blow it. another image that came into my...
i love "thrashing flames"
thanks very much for your nice comments! :D
perfect:)
She trudges across the crispy grass, The dew has not yet hardened, But the blades themselves seem stiff With bitter fear of the aging evening....
-this really brought back memories for me! i think you've really captured a moment from many people's childhoods
Ok, from what I can tell some people on here are at art school, others have been, and some never went but still carry on with their art. I'm at...
well actually i wrote it to be sad, but since you said that it's made me laugh, so either way! i guess it's just like life- you think somethings...
Your eyes are yellow, Your teeth are brown. But your smile is golden and Even when you frown, I see you glowing, From your grey shrivelled skin,...
i like this (lots of clapping)! for some reason anything with the word "concrete" in it attracts me. but the line you mentioned, "I live on a...
a tree still holding its blackened leaves
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