OK, so I was half right. :-)
As far as how do you find out if he is interrested? Is he a man? yes Is he breathing? yes Then he is interrested. The next time you guys are...
Tough call. If you talk to him about it, and there is nothing going on you MIGHT make him feel you are checking up on him, behind his back. This...
Good way to look at it. If it WAS meant to be, then it would have been.
A liar. Jealousy. Chewing with your mouth open. Talking with food in your mouth. Pit hairs (leg hair is OK) Total insecurity. A woman who is...
You are not dishonest. She is misusing her words. What she should have said is that you were not being "open" with her. Not, "You are not being...
Sounds like you are describing many goverments around the world, keeping thier populations in the dark about the wonderful places that lay just...
This brought a tear to my eye. To say this is a good poem is such an under statement. emelia, This is sad, real, true, and heartbreaking. You...
Thanks. This is a powerful line...
the message is a good one. the poem is good. Work on your syllable count and you will only make the poem better. Good job.
I've incorporated food in the front door, but never the back door.
I really like it, but I think it needs more. I expect it to continue....... For now, it certainly reads like the begining of a novel. It grabbed...
I am in total agreement.
I read it again and was wondering if the line "Hiding places must be steep" might read better if it were "Hiding places must be kept" Just a...
My darling, my lover, my beautiful wife:
I feel the opposite of what Aidan feels. With the use of "we" and "us", I get the feeling I can belong to the group if I chose to, or if I chose...
WOW, At 19, you shouldn't have been subjected to such heartache yet. Shit, it's a great piece of work. That's my opinion.
I thought this was about "MAN" raping and destroying "mother earth", but I don't see the connection. I'm not sure I get this poem.
Very good. It says so much, and it does it "simply".
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