Mr Alleycat strikes again, with uncommon uses for metaphores. I enjoyed this, as I enjoy most of your poems.
As I opened this thread, the song "Jail Break" came on the radio. How weird is that?
Title: I Hate This Guy !!!
What you have written is life, with the blinders taken off. Thumbs up.
Different. I like it.
This paints a very vivid picture. Nice job.
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A woman, with long hair, wearing one of my long sleve button down white dress shirts, and not wearing anything else, to me, is hotter than her...
Yep, I changed many a diaper, and pampers, back when we were having kids. I've been doing my own laundry for over 6 years. Most of the tie the...
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Thanks Jack. (By the way, I'm only 48.)
War, ain't it a bitch?
More....... We want more. I like it.
Nice love poem...... Nothing could possibly make me happier then you with me You might want to change "then" to "than".
Thank you blackheart.
It's my birthday and I don't like the cake
Holy shit. That about sums up the thought process in place while I was growing up in Boston, in the 60's. I'm happy to say that it isn't this...
[img] Ha ha ha
Nice touch to the story. Ha ha ha ha
About your avatar........ Why were you crying?
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