Thanks, I was in a silly mood this morning........
Interresting........ It tells a nice story.
Lovely. Reminds my of how I got started in a relationship once. And all she had to share (at first) was her pain.
Is good, It's emotional. But maybe the third word in this line Should be "was", instead of "is".
At his orientation XXXXXXX
Post away, naked, I'll read them.
Welcome back beautiful.......... I missed you, A LOT
Unhide your face, you brave, honest young woman. Just ask the guys how many of them have had the same, or similar items up their rectum.....
95 % of them???????? Just a guess.
Yep, I'm on that roller coaster again.
It's just a relaese of air. I agree, it's not a fart.
Damn, topper, after one year here, you are still writing hot pieces........ To answer your question, no. I think about it, but loose the...
Aaa-yu, Caaan't get they-a from hey-a......
Wow, I like this line........ And WOW WOW WOW This is funny, true, hard hitting, and to the point Good stuff.........
If you are not a fan of forced ryhming, then save yourself a few minutes and don't bother to read this poem. This is what is happening to me right...
Sounds like some depressed person turned on the TV and saw Gilbert Godfrey, and that was the last straw, and they took their own life. As they lay...
Good job. It made me think about the troubled past, and trying to be clean in the future, of the "victem" of the poem.
Because that's the way it sounds to a male. Yeah, like being the same guy that she was "interrested in" in the first place. Not trying to pick a...
100 % correct.
I think it needs an ending. I felt as thought it left me hanging.
Separate names with a comma.
