Amazing..........
This is great. I would suggest that you use some spacing, and some punctuation, to assit the reader on where to pause. A couple of your thoughts...
Hentai rules. (and the Japaneses tend to over emphasize many body parts)
5 years and the sex life has been cut in half? I was married for more than 25 years and I can't remember when we had sex less than 5 times a week....
Giving head is a once in a blue moon thing, or no show of emotion is a once in a blue moon thing?
I wish woman would do that. Force me, grab me by my ears. Shove me face in your pussy, and hld me there by the back of me head. This I would take...
The rhythm method is when the male withdraws his penis just prior to egaculation. The belief is that if a man doesn't cum in a woman, she won't...
There is a word for couples that use the rhythm method.......... PARENTS.
Slap it out of her. Stand up to her.
When your parents give him the boot, or they pass away, he will be forced to grow up. Don't worry about him. He is doing what he is allowed to...
The fear is that is you "put a woman on a pedestal", you will spoil her. Make her more materialistic. Make her "high maintenance" And she won't do...
No, I don't think I would do that again. I did it and it was an awkward experience. She didn't like it as much as she thought she would, and the...
Although I find her writing style challenging at times, it is just that. Her style. And it really makes some of the poems unique. She has a...
Cool. I hope I never find myself in that position. Is this a metaphore for a really bad relationship?
I think she just wanted to make sure that "he" wouldn't let his mother come between them. just poetic, I like the way your work flows. It's raw,...
Jesus Christ, I knew where that was going and the ending still hit me like a punch in the chest. Very powerful........ Very real
No comments after 3 months..............
Read my poem "coffee time". That is light-hearted. [img]
Wow, I went back 100 pages looking through some older posts, and I am glad I did. This is very sad, and like greengoddess, I thought I would share.
Nice poem, good job.
Separate names with a comma.
