loved the progression, and how, without going into great detail, an entire picture can be perceived. the raw edge at the end sums up a bad...
wierd. I had shingles a couple of weeks ago, due to an insane stress level and severe lack of sleep. It's the chickenpox virus, released by a...
what a bitter wine when midnight rolls by and metal dives and tides leak till sometime when blitzed by blackness, out. the chordal array...
house is most definitely not dead, and I can't think of very many hiphop artists that've used house driven beats. yazzer, i think most the...
such eloquence... this stanza hits home, the language of spirit, indeed... :)
excellent job, lozi... that first stanza is something else, lovely lovely... great repetition and a wonderful spoken-word aura... i particularly...
-secondhand smoke- great title, great poem! the last lines remind me of a Berryman poem, my favorite incidentally.... kinda has a quasi psyche...
instinctive is deepness with defensive thinking no, although, throw one back for me, we'll meter more consistently, eventually time will...
dim dreams disturbed, you think, "was it me, was it a more meaningful thing?" well seek that for yourself... or else a midnight of smoke within...
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What I'm saying is exactly what you're saying, and is exactly what that article seems to be saying, which is basically nothing, haha. :) The...
I'm going to play devil's advocate cos I've got a few free moments here at work and that article kinda seems a little cliche to me (however, I did...
thanks for the replies, guys! Lula is a personal fav of mine... if anyone's interested in listening to it... it's here, and it rocks (imo, of...
we're on I-40 east with only forty miles to go and though the caliente fantasy is fogging the window the intake is synthetic throat thunder while...
on every reveling weekend wishes poured in fountains from cents wasted but washed, funding contentment, finding residence under a pained...
elevator brain, braided three by five ignore the thirteenth floor, continue to rise past plato's cave and socratic lore past the burning bush's...
a borealis at the outer rim is trailing wailing rpm's caressing blessings closing in while the counter claim is coming out of hours underscored...
agree with all above, breathtaking work!
mobile home or shed won't make too much difference, mobile home probably insulated better tho, so there'd be less work. for soundproofing, do your...
although combined to unwind calculation, our nerves, a little numb, didn't notice the gas gathering below us: a yes-no-maybe box and the...
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