Thanks so much for the feedback Lonederganger and eggsprog! It means a lot!
DATE NIGHT by Corey Isaacs I’ve got a date. My hair is a thick, floppy,...
First thing's first, this needs to be edited. The grammar and syntax are a bit off. Go back and read it a few times, usually after the third time...
You: Hi Stranger: Are you Male?? You: No, im Corey. You: Are YOU male? Your conversational partner has disconnected.
^^^^ Ben Folds is the man :)
Stranger: hii there =) Stranger: 18 female horny, you ? You: robot!!!! Stranger: im so alone .. i want to get naughtyy You: ill bet you do...
Anyone who's gone on Omegle has had a funny convo or two. Post em here!
Everybody wants to know why This country is slowly slipping Around and around down the toilet “It’s the economy.” Cry the wall-streeters With...
1. Californication 2. It's Always Sunny In Philadelphia 3. Weeds
Pretty self-explanatory. Who are the characters that make/made you tune in every week? 1. Hank Moody (Californication, played by David Duchovny)...
Over all, I like it very much OptimisticFuture, but one big suggestion I would make is to implement some word economy. A lot of the wording is...
Thanks a ton Ghost! Glad you liked it!
Mannn it's been some time since i've posted here. How is everybody? Anyways, something I wrote, figured i'd share it: Writing is done On late...
It's "ecstasy".
Very simple, but a fun little poem. I think if you spend a little time on it, maybe you might have something pretty decent here. Keep workin' at...
The trees are dead, naked Disgusting, hideous Some remain, omnipresent While the weak lie lifeless in the dirt I can see my breath Running away...
It fluctuates, seeing as some times of the year are busier and than others, but I usually write at least twice a week for an hour or so.
Thanks! I admit that I have some playing around to do with this poem, and really, everything anyone writes is just a WIP, at least thats how I...
I'm sorry you feel that way, but could you please give me more insight as to why? Is there something wrong with the actual writing or do you just...
Very abstract. You've got some neat ideas going here, though, but I think it'd help alot for you to develop them a bit more.
Separate names with a comma.