A lot of people seemed to enjoy the last Mali poem that i posted, so I figured I'd post another one of my favorites:...
While I agree, Dirtydog, that public education leaves a lot to be desired, i think you are missing the point! Teachers do have the unique ability...
Let's get into an internet fight! Because that solves so much!
Personally Ramble, no offense taken. My view is that if you're unwilling to have your work torn apart, then you shouldn't post it online for all...
'tbh", i'll admit i actually had to look that one up in the urban dictionary. I'm sorry you feel that way, and I hate to say it, but you're...
tbh?
In case you weren't already sick of my whiney break up poetry, i've got another one for you beautiful people here at the Hip Forums. Enjoy :)
It's an idea that has been covered before. That said, I like it a lot. Very good work. Keep em comming!
This is where we had our first kiss Lying on the sand of an empty beach As the sounds of crashing waves And your sweet laughter Filled the sunny...
The others say she’s beneath me They tell me her eyes are too big That they bulge out of her head In a terrifying manner They say her forehead...
That's a pretty valid point, which i thought a little about. So this is what i came up with: Soft yellow blonde hair Electrifying blue eyes...
Hmmmm that's interesting. I just felt the first stanza needed more detail and "hourglass figure" is kind of a cliche and i got rid of it. But...
After sobering up and realizing what i had written was full of cliches, i tried to salvage it for what it was and make some revisions. Feel free...
She is quite a fine representation Of the enticingly peculiar female species Soft yellow blonde hair Electrifying blue eyes Which light up the...
I am man enough to admit that this brought a tear to my eye.
Thanks for the feedback everyone! It's greatly appreciated!!!
It's a valid point. There's no rules, no boundaries. I rather like it, though. There are so few creative mediums in which you can get across...
Yeah, generally i don't stress that stuff and just stick with traditional free verse (if there is such a thing), but that kind of came naturally.
Where did she go? He wonders drunkenly Taking a rather generous swig of his booze In order to soothe his ominously somber mood He puts the bottle...
hahaha touche...
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