As I look around And see the disgusting, faceless creatures Smiling, laughing, kissing Spewing utter nonsense And creating others, just like...
Well, it's different. although that last stanza is a bit unclear... I'm sorry you didn't like it, but i do hope that you will provide feedback...
hmm... i'm afraid there's not too much i can do about that, friend. Sorry you didn't like it, but thanks for the feedback!
Oh shit, my bad man. I didn't realize i posted this here before. But if you don't like the poem, that's cool. But give me some constructive...
I still don't believe in it. But I did this experiment where i checked my horoscope for a week. 6/7 days, it was fairly accurate. Maybe there's...
Oh and Craig Ferguson's show when I can't get any sleep. Why he's not on before Letterman, I will never understand.
I try not to watch TV but shows I can't stay away from are: - How I Met Your Mother - Entourage - Weeds - Californication
Just finished Hollywood by Charles Bukowski. GREAT book, one of the best I've ever read. Definitely recommend it to anyone looking for a good read.
I just finished reading Hollywood by Charles Bukowski. I'd never heard of him until a friend recommended him to me. It turns out for some reason,...
Couldn't help but notice you're from Billings! I'm currently writing a novel, and part of it takes place in Billings. Thought you might appreciate...
This has a lot of potential! That said, it also needs a lot of work. "around and around", should be changed It doesn't really help to emphasize...
I do. As a matter of fact, i want negative feedback. A lot of people, especially writers, have a hard time dealing with criticism. But, as you...
Do not approach me Do not talk to me I forbid you to so much as glance as me Don’t tell me about my sharp sense of humor Don’t tell me how I’m...
Good work! I hope you're not making too many enemies though!
I am exhausted just looking at this thing. If you space it out and make it a little more aesthetically pleasing, I would be glad to read it.
Not to be a stickler for grammar or anything, but I had to stop reading in the first two sentences. You left out whole words. I can empathize with...
Yes.
There is no purpose. I think it's human nature to want to feel important or superior. Mankind, for some reason, has developed this mentality that...
It depends. When i'm writing a novel, i usually find myself writing about addictions and personal struggles. It's odd to me though, since have...
I is, like, mad skeptical yo.
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