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very astute observation Aidan. this piece was inspired by just such an entity. thanx for your post.
many thanx for your input
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swop during for you're ... jeez what did i typr during for?
i hear what during saying here dude but i think you should work on the last two lines. they're the weak link in the piece. the rest i like. nice...
i like this very much dude ... its so apt and so descriptive!
right on relayer ... proving is difficult. even when you're charged with first degree murder it takes a jury of twelve good men and women to...
perhaps i used too broad a canvas in my post. i was really thinking more along the lines of george lucas and star wars. that sort of imagination...
difficult it is to argue about reincarnation with a man wearing a saffron robe. i tend to want to address you as holiness ... or master ... or...
i take your point eugene and i respect evrryones opinion and their right to that opinion. however i think you're confusing imagination and...
thanx man.
thanx very much psychedelic bones ... glad you enjoyed it ... i also prefer poetic story to prose or blank verse.
big brothet is watching
you mean like the george bush tony blair gordon brown kind?
the best thing about him was courtney love. she's got great tits.
scientologists started this illuminati shit. its a crock.
are you stoned man?
nobody under the age of sixty has any right to call themself a hippie or talk about hippie stuff. you don't know shit man if you weren't at...
whats with this freemason conspiracy shit? they're mostly a bunch of old, overweight, pisscats who go to their lodge to get away from their old,...
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