been writing a lot about changing the world and making it a better place. heres another example. all comments/critiques welcome. NATURES...
so beautiful...i must say that you can write
its beautiful. i like that its open
sweet and simple.
^thanks guys
im not so sure the name fits. But anyway this about a man i used to see on my way to school everyday, he would walk the streets teaching about the...
^ thanks guys
very cool
^ thanks ill try using some spacing.
they're good
welcome dreadlord. happy posting. :-)
beautiful. i absolutely loved it. :)
i liked it. both personalities make it complete...ur sexual style and his sensual style compliment each other to the point of perfection. when...
yes. i love it. id care if u died id be sad forever :(
Welcome Shalena. Happy posting. :)
All comments/critiques are welcome. Endless Journeys Change A tree stands high above your head in the middle of a thick green jungle....
i like the words the symbols kinda confused me
wow...really deep...i loved it.
Welcome. Happy posting Mae. :)
yea...i was just asking because many people say thats the issue with my poems that they change tenses a lot...but yours works well that way.
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